Van, I know it's kind of late but I hope that you read this. I like this the best of all the drafts you have done of this piece. I think that the beeping and the final beep at the end were really effective as well as the "wake up." I'm glad you continued to work on this because it shows.
Van,
ReplyDeleteI know it's kind of late but I hope that you read this. I like this the best of all the drafts you have done of this piece. I think that the beeping and the final beep at the end were really effective as well as the "wake up." I'm glad you continued to work on this because it shows.