Haiku Rough Final

I didn't get a chance to make this all nicely mixed in the Multimedia room yet but i feel like I made some improvements. I gutted the cellphone and vocal part (much to my displeasure) managed to get some birds finally and put those in. Lastly THE FRIDGE BUZZ IS INTENTIONAL, when i wake up the thing always seems to go on within a minute so I recorded it going on and mixed it in as much as people might not like that it is part of the room.

Here In My Room, Here In My Room

The moment when you wake up just before your alarm clock.

This is pretty close to finished. Any suggestions?

Dawn of the Dorm (Draft)

My dorm early in the morning when i wake up before my alarm goes (approx. 6:30AM) I want to get some better bird sounds so if you have any tips on getting birds send it my way.

Lying (Final-esque)

Final version, i might want to log in some more time after this gets critiqued but It is a lot better than the previous incarnation.

Audio Portrait (Take I)

I'm planning on re-recording parts of this with Mike, possibly get him actually lying to someone worked in there, and add an Intro explaining whats up with Mike and Lying.

What outside elements (music, sound effects, etc) could work to improve this? SHould anything (besides the roar) be removed to strengthen this?