I came up with 3 ideas, immediately scrapped one, and now i have these two.
First one i want to redo the vocals in a more machine-like tone and not use the effects so heavily, hopefully i can get the loop to be smoother as well. I'm also aware i accidently repeated several of the words too.
Second one only sounds good on headphones, mixing will be better next time and i forgot to reveal the lists name at the end, it is: Stuff in My Closet.
Which one feels like it has more potential, and what can i fix up in either?
Van,
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure which piece you're developing at this point. They both are interesting starts.
I think I have a preference for the Closet because the text takes some interesting and unexpected twists. I agree about the mix. If you are going with that list, you might consider a more densely building sonic texture to evoke a small space crammed with stuff (perhaps through sounds, layering, etc.)
Nice vocal experimentation in your pieces so far...
-stephanie
I think the second one ie, the one minute long piece has more impact because the music is more subltle and you have good vocal variations whereas in the first one i found myself nodding my head to Portishead rather than actually listening to what you were saying. The music in that one is very overpowering.
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